After the jan review it was found that the story itself had started to focus more on a narative then the actions itself. The actions were fine but the story was to long and needed to be condenced down. so I decided how to change the structure.
As I just want to focus on animation, prefereably leaning towards games. The actions that were best were runs,jumps ettc. so the story is now going to focus on the monkey trying to break the nut, instead of having him sleeping in the tree, its just going to get straight into the action, this make sit easier for me with there being less to animate and gives me more time to focus on the cycles.
so these are the two new alternative scenes, The first is the opening which is shorter, and the second is the ending.
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